英语作文常见错误改正

第一篇：英语作文常见错误改正

写作常见错误总汇及改正建议

【附错误归类及修改建议】

1. We college students had enough time to take a part-time job, no matter how busy we were.

2. There are so many countries using English that it had been regarded as an international language.

3. The eating habit of Chinese people have changed in the past decade.

4. Now fruits and vegetables can be seen everywhere when it is in season.

5. I can solve our problem of tuition and fees by taking some part-time jobs.

6. Without television, people can’t get information that comes from other parts of the world immediately.

7. At the age of six, my father began to give me English lessons.

8. To improve one’s writing skill, regular practice is necessary.

9. With the computer, one can do shopping, banking and read at home.

10. Nowadays, people not only eat enough food, but also eat better.

11. Participating in sports is good for our physical health, and through it we can also train our character.

12. Sometimes teachers will inform students of the heavy burden the have to bear.

13. Someone believes that the teacher’s task is to students knowledge, which may not be true.

14. People have been fighting against the influence of TV commercials, but it often proves useless.

15. While we reduce the number of vehicles, the speed of traffic can be increased.

16. Each of us may take a part-time job to help support ourselves, but if you spend too much time on it, your study will be affected.

17. TV presents us with many useful informations.

18. Making our cities greener is not an easy work.

19. Each people has his own opportunities.

20. Book knowledge is important, but we should learn something in the society.

21. When I was in the high school, I always have a beautiful picture of the college life.

22. If there were no electric power, we would have to do everything by the hands.

23. If there were no electric power, factory would stop producing goods, car, bus and train would stop running.

24. TV now plays and important role in our daily life, Because we think it extremely important.

25. There are many ways to contact with society. For example, join in clubs, take part-time jobs and help the poor.

26. If no electricity, all activities such as watching TV and seeing movies will be impossible.

27. Because some college students could not find a better job, so they decided to continue to read for second degree.

28. Although an opportunity is rare, but we must be ready to seize it.

29. We students should learn / study as much knowledge as possible.

30. With a rise in he number of cars and buses, traffic in Shanghai has become more and more crowded.

31. People begin to eat more vice food.

32. Actually, traffic jams have effected our daily life.

33. In my opinion, I believe the present educational system is in need of reform.

34. The reason why people choose to live in the country is because there is no pollution nor noise there.

35. After four years, we all graduated from college and entered society.

36. Many college students have a strong desire to be independent on their parents.

37. The computer like TV, it has both advantages and disadvantages.

38. Obviously, our country would stop develop if no electricity.

39. Riding bicycles conveniences my work.

40. Unlike movies, TV shows on continuously, and doesn’t need to pay an extra money.

41. Too easy or to difficult is no good for us.

42. College students doing part-time jobs is god to his family, himself, and the whole society.

43. The canteen should setup several televisions.

44. Reading books can acquire knowledge.

45. People think go to the movie will cost a lot of money.

46. There are many people take part in sports and games now.

47. There are many people complain the paper-making mill pollute our fresh water can by people use.

48. Although difficulty is exist, but we can overcome it.

49. We should put our heart into the study.

50. We young people are now living in sugar water.

51. In a society where men are heavy and women are light, women cannot enjoy full equality.

52. People set off firecrackers to congratulate the red and white happy things.

53. We should advocate five talks and four beauties.

54. Those are my humble opinions.【错误归类及修改建议】

(一) 主干性错误

时态：1，2

1. We college students we are.

2. There are so many countries using English that itbeen regarded as an

international language.

语态：15

15. While theof traffic should be

increased.

句子成分：25，26，38，39，41，42，43，44，45，46，47，48

25. There are many ways to contact with society. For example, join in clubs,

take part-time jobs, or help the poor.

26. Ifno electricity, all activities,

be impossible.

38. Obviously, our country would stop 39. It is convenient for me to go working by bicycles.

41.no good for us.

42. Collegedoing part-time jobs is good to himself, his family and the whole

society.

43. Several televisions should be setup in the canteen.

44. 45. People think going to movies will cost a lot of money.

46. There are many peoplepart in sports and games now.

47. There are many people complain the paper-making mill our fresh

water 48. Although difficulties exist, we can overcome them.

主干搭配：30，34，40，

30. With a rise in the number of cars and buses, in Shanghai 34. The reason why people choose to live in the country is that there is neither

pollution nor noise there.

40. Unlike movies, TV shows on continuously, and the viewers don’t need to pay an

extra money.

(二) 细节性错误

代词(指代明确)：12，13，14，

12. Sometimes (如此一来，句中的they就明确的指向了students)

13. Someone believes that a teacher’s task is to give students knowledge,

which may not be true. (如此一来，which明确的指向前文的整句含义)

14. People have been fighting against the influence the influence of TV commercials,

butoften proves useless. (it指代不明确，换成the effort便可以明确的指代前文中所言的斗争)

名词(泛指，特指)：20，21，22，23

20. It is important for us to acquire knowledge from books, but we should also learn

something from (不需要the)

21. When I was in a high school, I always had a beautiful picture of college life.

22. If there were no electric power, we would have to do everything 23. If there were no electric power,would stop producing goods, buses and trains would stop running.

用词(准确性)：17，18，19，29，31，32，33，35，36，37，

17. TV presents us withuseful (分清可数名词和不可数名词)

18. Making our city greener is not an easy (分清抽象名词和具体名词)

19. Each (分清个体和集体概念)

29.

31.

32.

33. We students shouldas much knowledge as possible. People begin to have more non-staple food. Actually, traffic jams have (注意区分形似词) In my opinion, the present educational system is in need of reform. (不必重复)

35. Four years , we all graduated from college and entered society.

36. Many college students have a strong desire totheir children.

37. Like TV, a computer has both advantages and disadvantages.

修饰成分：6，7，8，

6. Without a television, people cannot immediately get information that comes from

other parts of the world.

7. At my age of six, I was taught English by my father.

8. To improve one’s writing skill, he needs regular practice.

(三) 逻辑性错误

逻辑缺失：23，

23. If there were no electric power,would stop producing goods,would stop running.

逻辑冗余：27，28，48

27. Because some college students cannot find satisfactory jobs, they decide to

continue their schooling for second degree.

28. Although opportunities are rare, we must be ready to seize them.

48. Although difficulties exist, we can overcome them.

逻辑不成立：24

24. TV now plays an important role in our daily life, insight into the alien world without it.

(四) 一致性错误

主谓一致：2，3

2. There are so many countries using English that itbeen regarded as an

international language.

3. The diet of Chinese peoplechanged in the past decade.

句中指代一致：4，5，16

4. Now fruits and vegetables can be seen everywhere whenin season.

5. I can solveproblem of tuition and fees by taking 16. Each of us may take a part-time job to help support himself, but if he spends too

much time on it,

平行结构前后一致：9，10，11，15，20

9. With a computer, one can do shopping, banking and

10. Nowadays, people have .

11. Participating in sports is good for p.

15. While the number of vehicles is reduced, the efficiency of traffic should be

increased.

20. It is important for us to acquire knowledge from books, but we should also learn

something from .(整句前后要平行)

(五) 荒谬、无聊、不可思议的错误

49，50，51，52，53，54

49. We .

50. We young people are now leading a sweet life.

51. In a society equality.

52. Firecrackers are often set off

53. We should advocate 54. Those are my opinion.

第二篇：英语作文常见典型语法错误

语言是评判作文的一个极其重要的因素。在实际的阅卷过程中，语法错误，尤其是较为严重的错误，是阅卷人员的主要“照顾点”，有时甚至是惟一的点;当然那样处理是有道理的，大家可以设想一下，一篇语法上漏洞百出、严重影响表达的作文又会有什么样的好内容呢?如果因为语言上的错误而导致失分，那将得不偿失。因此，认清各种各样的语法错误，尽可能地避免少犯，对于提高作文分是有极大的帮助的。

1) We always working till late at night before taking exams. (误)

2) We should read books may be useful to us. (误)

1) This test is end, but there is another test is waiting for you. (误)2) The driver of the red car was died on the spot. (误)

1) Someone/Somebody think that reading should be selective. (误)2) My sister go to the cinema at least once a week. (误)

1) I was walking along the road, and there are not so many cars on the street. (误)

2) We have little time to read some books which we interest. (误)

3) I am a student who has studying in the college for two years. (误)1) It is my point that reading must be selectively. (误)

2) Honest is so important for everyperson. (误)

3) The old man was hit by a car when he across the street. (误)

第三篇：2014年高考英语作文：写作中常见的9种句法错误

一、词性误用

词性误用常表现为：介词错用为动词，形容词错用为副词，名词错用为动词等。

例：They earn some money so that they can independence.他们挣钱是为了自立。

解析：independence是名词，句中误用为动词。

改为：They earn some money so that they can be independent.

二、修饰语错位

英语与汉语不同，同一个修饰语放在句子中不同的位置，可能会引起句子含义的变化。这一点常被同学们所忽视，因而造成了不必要的误解。

例：I believe I can do it well and l will better know the world outside the campus.我相信我会做得很好，而且我将对校园外的世界有更好的了解。

解析：better位置不当，应置于句末。

改为：I believe I can do it well and l will know the world outside the campus better.

三、句子不完整

在口语中，交际双方可借助手势、语气等来理解对方的意思，不完整的句子也完全可以被理解。可是书面语就不同了，句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清，这常常发生在主句写完以后，学生又想加些补充说明的情况下。

例：There are many ways to know the society. For example, by TV, radio,newspaper and soon.了解社会的途径有很多，比如，可以通过电视、广播、报纸，等等。

解析：本段后半部分“For example，by TV，radio，newspaper and so on.”不是一个完整的句子，仅为一些不连贯的词语，不能独立成句。

改为：There are many ways to know society,for example,by TV,radio,and newspaper.

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四、主谓不一致

英语的谓语动词在人称和数上必须与主语保持一致。由于受汉语的影响，许多同学在写作时经常忽略句子的主谓一致关系，从而造成错误。

例：Once one have money，he can do what he want to do.人一旦有了钱，他就能想干什么就干什么。

解析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has;同理，want应改为wants，本句是典型的主谓不一致。

改为：Once one has money,he can do what he wants to do.

五、指代不清

指代不清主要指代词与被指代的人或物关系不清，或者先后所用的代词不一致。

例1：Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid.玛丽和我姐姐很要好，因为她要她做她的伴娘。

解析：读完上面这一句话，读者无法明确地判断两位姑娘中谁将结婚，谁将当伴娘。如果我们把容易引起误解的代词加以明确，意思就一目了然了。

改为：Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid.

例2：And we can also know the society by serving it yourself.我们还可以通过亲身参与、体验的方式了解社会。

解析：句中人称代词we和反身代词yourself指代不一致。

改为：And we can also know the society by serving it ourselves.

六、累赘

同学们在写书面表达时应尽量做到简洁：写句子没有一个多余的词，写段落没有一个多余的句子;能用单词的就不用词组，能用词组的就不用从句或句子。

例1：In spite of the fact that he is lazy，I like him.尽管他很懒惰，我还是喜欢他。

解析：本句的“the fact that he is lazy”系同位语从句，我们应按照“简洁”的原则加以简化。

改为：In spite of his laziness,I like him.

例2：For the people who are diligent and kind, money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need.对于勤奋善良的人来说，钱只是用来购买所需东西的工具。

解析：整个句子可以大大简化，累赘重复过多。

改为：Diligent,caring people use money only to buy what they need.

七、句子不连贯

句子不连贯是指一个句子内部前言不搭后语，或是结构上不畅通。句子不连贯也是英语书面表达中比较常见的毛病。

例：The fresh water，it is the most important things of the earth.淡水是地球上最重要的东西。

解析：The fresh water与逗号后的it不连贯，It与things在语法上不一致。

改为：Fresh water is the most important thing in the world.

八、句子结构混乱

句子结构混乱主要是受汉语思维方式影响而导致的。同学们在日常学习中应多加练习，培养语感。

例1：There are many students are playing basketball on the playground.操场上有许多学生在打篮球。

解析：上面的句子中出现了两个谓语动词，不符合英语的语法习惯。

改为：Many students are playing basketball on the playground.

例2：The girl is standing over there is from a big city.站在那边的女孩来自一个大城市。

解析：一个简单句中不能有两个谓语系动词，结构混乱。

改为：The girl standing over there is from a big city.

九、句型单调，句子与句子之间缺乏过渡

一篇文章如果简单句过多，句型单调，即使语法错误较少，思路较清晰，看后也会使人感到乏味。同学们应学会单句、复句交替使用，经常变换句型，尝试使用一些较复杂的语法结构及句型，适当运用过渡词，使文章更加连贯。

例：They sleep fewer than eight hours every day. It has great influence on their health.

解析：这段话中使用的全部是简单句，句型比较单调，可以改为定语从句或加入插入语，克服这一缺点。

改为：Actually, they sleep fewer than eight hours every day, which will,no doubt, have great influence on their health.

第四篇：小升初作文常见题目以及失分原因和改正策略

孩子小升初作文成绩不高的原因总结

作文在考试中占的分值越来越大，但小编发现很多孩子的作文有待提高，近期我们采访了郑州捷登教育的宋老师，他向我们指出在小升初考试作文中，学生们主要存在以下八个问题，导致分数不高：

一、写作文时思路打不开，容易大众化，千人一面

比如某名校的作文题《我爱我家》，大部分同学不能广泛的理解家，大部分同学写的是我生病了，父母送我去医院，我很感动。大家都知道，考场作文比较性强，同样的题目，同样的题材，税额文章能脱颖而出，往往取决于选材，构思与创新，要么你就“唱反调”，用新观点、从新角度去写大家常写的内容。

二、不能快速而准确的审题

现在的作文题和以往的作文题相比发生了很大变化，原来的小学作文题经常出现童年、老师、我的爸爸、我的妈妈之类，这样的作文给定了题目，学生的发挥性就不大，只要按照试卷给出的题目来确定思路来写就可以了。但近几年作文题趋向“开放性命题”，主要指的是“半命题”和“自命题”的形式。这使得很多学生不知如何下手。

三、不注意小节

大家都知道作文考试有一个最基本的要求，就是要求书写字迹工整、卷面整洁，正确使用书写格式及标点符号。正是这小小的细节是入选一类文、二类文最起码的要求。而每年的小考或中考作文中能达到这个标准的作文大概在五分之一左右。

四、所用时间太长

现在很多学校不对学生进行当堂限时作文训练，而是让学生把作文拿回家去写，这样很容易使学生养成两个不好的习惯，第一是学生为了省时省事，找遍文章一抄了事;第二

是学生缺乏写作文的氛围，写写停停，养成了不专心和拖拉的毛病，一篇文章往往可以写上一个半甚至两个小时。而不好的学习习惯比不会写作文更可怕。

五、离题

为了使孩子写作文不离题，就要教孩子在开头和结尾点题。现在不要教孩子什么点题技巧，让孩子在文章的开头把题目重复一下即可。比如国庆节假期里，老师让孩子写一篇题目为《国庆节》的作文，孩子在开头是这样点题的：“国庆节，是祖国母亲的生日。”文章结尾没有点题。我让他写几个字点题，他就写道：“国庆节，是祖国妈妈的生日;国庆节，也是祖国妈妈的骄傲。”孩子在开头点了题目，就不容易写走题了;在结尾点题，则能使文章结构更为紧凑。

六、无话可说

写作文无话可说，是因为孩子不善于从多个角度观察写作对象。让孩子有话可说，就要教他从多个角度观察写作对象的方法。比如写《我的爸爸》，孩子抓耳挠腮，不知如何下笔。这时，家长就可以告诉他：可以写爸爸的模样，爸爸的习惯，爸爸和你之间发生过的事情;接下来还可以进一步细分观察角度，比如爸爸的模样，可以写爸爸的眼睛、鼻子、嘴巴、头发，爸爸的习惯可以写抽烟、喝酒、看书、口头禅。这样，角度多了，孩子就有话可说了。小孩子的作文，所写的无非是人物、事物、景物，观察的角度都差不多，这样指导几次，孩子练熟了，就不会再感到无话可说了。

七、干巴巴的

孩子作文干巴巴，打个比方，就是只有几根筋和骨头，没有肉。假如写树，他就写：“这棵树很高很高，有很多树枝，长了很多叶子”，不就是几根筋吗?要想孩子写作文生动，可从三个方面努力：一是加后缀，二是添修饰，三是用比喻。

什么是加后缀?就是在形容词后面添加补语。比如说花儿很红，就可以说“花儿红得像鲜血染过的一样”，“像鲜血染过的一样”就是后缀。什么是添修饰?就是在动词前面添加状语，在名词前面添加定语。比如说孩子进班了，就可以说“孩子晃晃悠悠地进班了”;比如说这是一支旧钢笔，就可以说“这是一支比我奶奶年纪还要大的钢笔”。“晃晃悠悠”就是状语，“比我奶奶年纪还要大”就是定语。至于用比喻，那就很简单了，家长会，孩子也会，关键是要用得恰当，这就需要孩子加强对生活现象的观察。如果你孩子的作文总是得不了高分，那么不要一味地责怪孩子，或者就此下定论孩子在写作方面没有天赋，家长和老师要静下心来，认真分析孩子作文分数不高的原因，看看孩子是不是有宋老师说的上述问题，然后又针对性地一个个解决，相信孩子的作文成绩会很快提高上去的。

第五篇：改正我们的错误

在成长的道路上，每一个人都会犯错误。回忆我过去上三年级时犯的那个错误，至今都让我难以忘记。

一个周五下午，放学回家我就看起电视来，外婆催促我快写作业，我却置之不理。周六，我还是没有动手。终于，周日，妈妈实在忍不住了，对我说：“明天就要上课了，你怎么还没有写你作业，赶紧去写!”我吓了一跳，本想推到晚上8点再写的想法也彻底没了，只好像温顺的小绵羊一样乖乖地去写作业。

那天晚上，我一直写到11点才把作业写完，而且写得我又累又困。作业本上，原本漂亮整齐的字体也变得东倒西歪的。之后，爸爸妈妈压住火，说了我几句才让我睡觉。第二天早晨，该起床上学了。我艰难地从床上爬起来，打着哈欠，迷迷瞪瞪地吃了早饭，背上书包冲到学校。上午有四节课，我努力睁着眼睛，恨不得拿两根火柴撑住眼皮，老师写在黑板上的字我感觉朦朦胧胧的，真想有张床立马躺上去美美地睡一觉。而且昨天写的作业今天一发下来，上面有好多刺眼的大红叉，还得了一个“良”。

事后，我并没有意识到自己的错误，反而觉得生气，不就是作业嘛!早写晚写不一样吗?可渐渐地，我意识到“明 1

日复明日，明日何其多”。早写完作业不仅质量高，还能腾出充裕的时间。我感到十分后悔和自责，为什么不听父母的话，弄得作业和上课质量不好。我下决心改正它，正如一句名言——错误是不可避免的，但是不要重复错误，一定要改正它。

从那以后，我再也不把作业推到周日做了，一直是在周五就把作业写完，这样不但作业质量高，而且可以在周

六、日好好休息。

“一个人知道了自己的短处，能够改过自新，就是幸福的”，这句话是莎士比亚说的。是的，只要知道了自己的短处并改正它的人，就是幸福的。