二零一八年上海英语中考一模作文
二零一八年上海英语中考一模作文 第一篇
美术老师依然是笑，而我却在她的温和的话语里涨红了脸——果真是文章的事，她还亲手制作了礼物并写了回信送给我。我接过那张叠得规整的纸，只感觉手心微微地向外沁着汗，只是反复地轻念着：“谢谢。”而后像是飞一样的落进了喧嚣的教室，迅速地穿过那些说说笑笑的人群，深吸着翻开了纸。那一刻，眼角是微微雾气的朦胧，只感觉心中猛一阵颤栗。那些字字句句，那张精致的书签打破了我许久以来的缄默的心，终于被这些温热撼动了尖锐的冰山边角。这些是我生命中，收到的最珍贵的礼物。
事实上，我的沉默，我一说话便脸红笨拙的性子，都使得我不会引起老师的注意。便仿若只是漂浮游荡的尘埃，找不到根脚的失落。少时与老师的亲近，却也只能算作机缘巧合，勉强算得过的成绩如同海边的浪，将我一下下地推向老师，推向那些勉强支吾过的`谈心。然而美术老师，她便好像本来就是与我们同样的人，从我们之间并没有生出那些浓密繁杂的距离。即便是在那高高的讲台之上，我却仍能看得见她眸子里的晶亮。
从西门的垃圾车旁路过，总看见那些杂乱的垃圾上落着一朵朵枯萎了的花和大片大片露出边角的花篮。尽管那里未曾载着我送出的礼物，心中却也着实有些悲凉——这些便尽是荒芜了，被弃置的心意。而美术老师，她会真正在意学生的每一份爱，只当做人生最庞大的美好来珍藏。其实尊敬与爱戴，从不需要以刻意的伪装来换取。我们的眼睛，可以看见完美面具背后的一张张形形色色的脸。我想我听得见，美术老师从心底爱每一个孩子的声音。
我们需要的，仅仅是爱。我们的感动，也来源于爱。我想我会永远记得，那一天捧在手心里一字一句读下去的纯净与温暖。
二零一八年上海英语中考一模作文 第二篇
Shanghai Disneyland will be open soon, as the day is so close, there are all kinds of trial run information released. The public is so looking forward to it and they want to have the honor become the first visitors. While after scanning the released information, they feel unsatisfied.
上海迪士尼乐园很快就要开放了,由于距离开放日子是如此的接近,各种各样的试行信息发布了出来。公众是如此的期待,他们希望能有荣幸成为第一批游客。然而在浏览了发布信息后,他们感到不满意。
The first is about the high entrance ticket. According to the average ticket of about 四零零 RMB, a family always need to pay at least for 三 persons, which means it takes them more than 一零零零 RMB. It is only the lowest budget for the local visitors, while for the nonlocal visitors, they need to pay for the hotel, which is a great expense.
第一个是高价格的门票。根据平均一张门票约四零零元,一个家庭总是需要支付至少三人,这意味着他们需要支付超过一零零零元人民币。然而最低的预算只是对于当地游客来说,而对于外地游客,他们需要支付酒店,这是一笔巨大的开销。
The second is the food in Disneyland. The offcial website has listed the price that offered in the amusement park. A beef burger with cheese is 八零 RMB, a child-sized hot dog is 六零 RMB and so on. Many people think it is such high price for them to pay. In that way, a family only pays for the food will cost more than 五零零 RMB!
第二个是迪斯尼乐园的食物。官方网站列出了游乐园提供的食物价格。一个牛肉汉堡和奶酪是八零元,一个儿童的热狗是六零元等等。许多人认为这是很高的价格。这样的话,一个家庭光支付食物就要超过五零零元!
The trial run of Shanghai Disneyland exposes many problems and the public concerns about the price. Maybe adjusting the price can attracts more tourists.
上海迪士尼乐园的试行反应了许多问题，公众关心的是价格。也许调整价格可以吸引更多的游客。
二零一八年上海英语中考一模作文 第三篇
What will I be doing this time next year? No doubt that I will be studying in my dream senior high school.
My senior high school life of next year will be full of extra activities to broaden my horizon, such as debate competition, international exchange study and so on. What’s more, I could be fond of gaining knowledge and improving my abilities to accomplish my goals. In addition, I hope to become a volunteer in a charity organization, like one foundation, because there are millions of people who need help in China. I should spare no efforts to make a contribution to spread my love.
Where there is a will, there is a way. I believe that I will have a wonderful life this time next year.
二零一八年上海英语中考一模作文 第四篇
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around mountains are covered with all kinds of green the town runs a small ’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the the children of the school age can go to anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
二零一八年上海英语中考一模作文 第五篇
I believe eating with parents will make teenagers healthier.
First, as we know, a happy mood keeps people healthy. Talking more with parents is a better way of helping solve problems in our daily life. The dinner time is just a chance for communication.
Also, home-made meals are healthier for us to eat, for the food problem seems more and more serious now.
As for me, I have dinner with my parents every day. My family all think the time for dinner is the most important moment for each of us.
二零一八年上海英语中考一模作文 第六篇
Life is changeable, and thats why everyone longs for the future, which is full of challenge as well as hope.
Perhaps I will have achieved my goal this time next year, studying in a senior high school. Despite that, diligence will be still needed to make myself go further in English. Basically, it is important to concentrate in class and take notes carefully. Then, I will benefit from reading English books. What is more, going abroad is of great use in improving my oral English. Only in this way can I progress in English endlessly.
Make plans and go for what I want. And I believe when the challenge is coming, the hope is also around the corner.
二零一八年上海英语中考一模作文 第七篇
一。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
二。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， _There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。_ I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， _Where did you go?_ she gave me this simple answer， _To my neighbors — they are hungry also!_
三。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
_Little boy， why are you standing here crying?_ they asked。
_I want Mom， I go home。_ said the boy， still crying。
_Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。_
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
二零一八年上海英语中考一模作文 第八篇
导入：
第一段：提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
正文：
第二段：Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出二~三个解决此类问题的办法
结论：
第三段：These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法
二零一八年上海英语中考一模作文 第九篇
This is my first week in ** Senior Middle here is new for school is an old school but it`s very have 五零 new classmates in my `re all very excellent, I think, and I felt a little I`m too come to think of it,it`s a very good believe I can also be very excellent if I study with such excellent didn`t know why Ms *** chose me to be the committee of I know it`s a good chance for me to raise my I can do is do my best in the am sure that Ms *** and my classmates can help me when I do something wrong. Because they`re all very `s a pleasure to work and study with `m really very `m not an outstanding student in this class,but I can do the same thing like believe I won`t make anyone disappointed.
二零一八年上海英语中考一模作文 第一零篇
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我是第一次这样称呼自己，说实话我没有想过，会给自己写一封信。我很惊讶，我不知道一模后的我会是什么样，成绩是好是坏我都不知道，首先我要祝福自己，祝福自己第一次给未来的自己写信，祝福自己第一次在不知道成绩好坏的情况下写这封信。希望我自己能考好一点，希望我自己能咸鱼翻身，不再是全班倒数几名。
也许，我已经知道了一模的成绩，也许，我已经知道了一模的严重性和重要性。一模的成绩的好坏关系到了我的毕业和将来的工作。一模后的自己，如果考试没有考好，那么希望你中考能够考好，也有可能我心太大了，一模决定着我的命运，一定要重视，不过一模后的自己你一定要记住：老师和家长都在看着你，看着你迈过成功的一步，加油！一模后的自己。我相信未来的我，我相信你一定能行！因为你是我最了解，最熟悉的.一个人。一模后的自己，如果一模没有考好，那么不要气馁，站起来，中考还在等着你，等着你去打开中考这扇大门，如果顺利，你会考到自己理想的高中，那样你才可以考到自己梦寐以求的大学。站起来，我相信你！我在中考那扇大门里等着你。加油！！！一模后的自己。
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